Free writing
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today for writing we had to do a free write I wrote about a mysterious bag here it is
The Mysterious bag
When the teacher comes in she places a white paper bag on her desk then she walks out of the classroom again. Then the bag starts moving and the whole class is still for a moment. It feels like forever until someone says “is that bag really moving”a boy say’s “yes I think it is” the class was silent.
Then the teacher walks in. A girl says “there's something in your bag Miss” the teacher says “don't worry it's only my pet mouse Raty' ' I bought him to show you. The whole class quivered. One boy said “can we see him? '' The teacher said “sure he is a very small Mouse”. The teacher pulls him out and all the girls screamed… As the little mouse jumped out of the teacher's hands and lept on a girl's desk. And scampered up her head he just sat there “don't move '' the teacher said.
Some boys laughed and some girls screamed but the girl that had the mouse on her head screamed louder than everyone and flicked the mouse off her head. Raty took off and disappeared under a pile of books...
have you ever done this before?
Hi Ben! Wow nice blog post the thing what I really like on your blog is how you described your task. And the thing what you can improve on is making your story longer
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