The man and the fox

 The man and the fox

W.A.L.T write narrative stories

this week we had to write a narrative story about a picture. The picture was a fox leaping 

we had to do the power process plan and prepare, organise, write, edit and re read

here it is

The Man and the Fox One dark foggy night in a big forest a man is walking around when suddenly a fox jumps out he gets such a shock he runs away. Another fox jumps out in front of him. The fox snatches his ankle and pulls him into a small clearing as the man struggles. It was 

no use the fox was too powerful then wildly the Fox began to talk. “My name is Foxy” he says “we have chosen you to help us”. “The poachers are trying to get us”. That second, two poachers 

appeared out of nowhere. The Fox takes off into the deep dark forest. It was a Misty night and you could hear the hunter's cold breath from a mile away. But they were getting really close then all of a sudden 

the fox jumped out and said “come with me”. The poachers were less than 10 metres away the mist was blocking their view. The fox started sprinting off again with nothing left to do. The man chased after the fox and the poachers saw him and shouted “hey what are you doing out here” with that the man took off into the mist frantically running after the fox it was a full moon a crystal 

clear night. Finally, after running like crazy the poachers were out of sight. That's why we need your help, the fox said...

 

Great Job Ben I Love How You described the fox and how it's so majestic I love how you use descriptive words as well to be continued. Rusty 

 Feedback: Well written Ben, Next time don’t forget to correct your punctuation and have all the speak marks when someone is talking. Good work on the detailed words Ben! Mrs Hall

reflection

I think I did ok

next time I think I need to improve on punctuation

have you done this before?