Yesterday we went to Te Punawai-Ora pools to do a pool session with Oliver to learn how to snorkel because next week on Thursday we are going to Matai Bay. First we put on our wet suit and got mask , snorkel and flippers and hoped in the pool. We did a few activities and swim around the pool it was fun. Then we had to take the wet suit off it was quite hard.
My favourite part was diving under water because I could hold my breath for a long time.
My goal is to get a scallop while snorkelling.
Do you like snorkelling.
Hello Ben, I have studied your accomplish in writing and I quite enjoy it my dearest concerns are that you would add the things we did this though is still very good and is nice too read.
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Hi ben, I really liked that you had remembered punctuation and showed what your goal is for snorkeling. Ben I think that you need to improve on when you were writing, I notice you said put wet suit on, and mask then you putted a comma maybe next time you could see if you listing is correct if you do it and also on the last question, to the people at the end it seemed you forgot your question mark maybe work a bit on punctuation. But anyways keep up the great work and keep doing great blog comments.
ReplyDeleteHi Ben, I liked your blog post and I think you should add the things we had to do i still really liked our blog post with how you explained.
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