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Monday, 3 August 2020

writing task

I.A.L.T upload my learning to my blog and write about it

Last week we had to do a writing task about expanding sentences. We had to write the noun then adjectives then verb or adverb then were then them together.

Here is mine



Reflection

Next time I could improve on adding more verbs/adverbs and adjectives.

I think I'm a really good descriptive sentence.

hope you like it.

1 comment:

  1. hi Ben great job on your blog and the door slammed.
    your picture is a bit to dark to see so next time make sure that you are in a light place. good job
    from james

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