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Did you know 1 bee has to fly around the globe three times to make 1 lb of honey and for us to just steal it off them!
Bees like to collect honey in spring when the flowers are in bloom. then they soak it up with their straw-like tongues and store it in their stomach. When they're full they fly back home to the hive.
While the honey is inside the bees stomach it mixes with proteins and vitamins. When the bees get back home they find an empty comb and spit the honey into it then cover it with wax.
then the beekeepers come and take it off them then it goes to big factories.
While the honey is inside the bees stomach it mixes with proteins and vitamins. When the bees get back home they find an empty comb and spit the honey into it then cover it with wax.
then the beekeepers come and take it off them then it goes to big factories.
I am proud of the images I used because they describe the piece of writing I think I need to work punctuation because I don't have much.
have you ever don an explanation piece of writing?
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