The Mysterious bag
W.A.L.T write descriptive narrative stories
this week we had to write a story about a picture we were given and story starter
The Mysterious bag
When the teacher comes in she places a white paper bag on her desk then she walks out of the classroom again. Then the bag starts moving and the whole class is still for a moment. It feels like forever until someone says “is that bag really moving”
a boy say’s “yes I think it is” the class was silent.
Then the teacher walks in.
A girl says “there's something in your bag Miss” the teacher says “don't worry it's only my pet mouse Raty” I bought him to show you. The whole class quivered. One boy said “can we see him” the teacher said sure he is a very small Mouse the teacher pulls him out and all the girls scream…
reflection
my favourite part was writing a story
the most challenging part was coming up with what I wanted to write
have you done this before?